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Optimism from Darkness's avatar

This is so good. You have a way with words my friend.

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Anne Marie Coleman's avatar

Perfect absurd life. Elevators, coffins, inboxes, platforms… different boxes, same story. We step in willingly, trust the system, push the button, wait. The horror isn’t the elevator shrinking , it’s realizing most of us are already riding ours down, door by door, living horror unknowingly. Modern Kafka, indeed….

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M3cents's avatar

Some coffins we walk into willingly!

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Darkly Romantic Klar Nett's avatar

David! Why did you stay there as the walls keep closing in, especially as the doors kept opening on each floor (up to a point.) I would have been out of there so quickly man.

A nice piece Sal, good morning read with my coffee

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